Monday, January 16, 2017

The Audit

        The Audit is a short story by Rachel May that details a possible future in consequence to what humans have done to the Earth. It specifically deals with the over consumption of products that humans are addicted to as well as the over consumption of fuel in the means of energy. This is a large point because many people do not understand that their energy comes at a larger price than the monetary value. Burning coal and natural gases have costed our environment irreparable damage.
      Though this short story seems to be taking place in a futuristic society, it really could just be looked at as an alternate reality. The problems we are facing are already large enough that we need some serious intervention such as this. The government forces management through a Global Climate Audit that takes the family by surprise.
      The author follows the father of the family around on his journey to cheat the system. The father, Bill, finds a man who lives off the “grid” and supposedly has a low enough carbon footprint that might be able to make up for his excessive one.
       A piece of dialogue near the end of The Audit that I found quite profound:
“Exactly. So you’ll start figuring out what you need-good bus service, wind farms, bike highways, zoning that allows you to keep chickens and grow vegetables instead of lawns…”
“Tell me about it. We’re not even allowed to hang out laundry out to dry.”
“And once there are enough of you,” Goodwin concluded, “you’ll change the whole geography of your lives.”
       If this were to truly happen there would be no squandered hope and progress would be made in the right direction. Especially when we see, at the individual level, a man changed so drastically by a new perspective and a little mountain air.

2 comments:

  1. I really like your interpretation of this story, that is takes place in an alternate reality. Very clever, I never would have thought of that.

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  2. I also never interpreted the world of the story as an alternate reality. But it's interesting to think of it that way. And I was struck by that same quote from Goodwin--the one where he talks about what people will figure out we need. I like that the author is giving real-world applicable solutions without being too preachy or obvious.

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